This piece is very well sketched. It is very fear inspiring. I however think that the piece would look much better with color. In black and white it is very difficult to have as much of an impact unless shading is added in with pencil. Also a better description what is being drawn is necessary. It does not to be extremely in depth, but it should have some insight to what the author was thinking or feeling at the time. Other than those couple things, This piece is very well on it's way to being quite a master piece. However I feel that I should stress how much more of an effect color would have on the piece.
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